Sunday, March 10, 2013

ON THE SPOT POETRY by (me!) sandra, ttgp

ORIGINAL POST 12/14/2007:

he doesn't want the pretty package

loves to read me raw


he doesn't like to instant message

he reads slow be-cause


he loves me from the inside out

and not the outside in


exactly why i love him back

too bad he's pretend.


~sandra, ttgp

on the spot poetry while mowing the lawn

2 Comments:

At 10:26 AM, Blogger abdelmoaty said...

truly wonderful...!

 
At 5:06 PM, Blogger eric1313 said...

I saw it, it works, it has rhythm and rhyme and everything else.

Now you just need to write a hundred more of them to get that book of poetry out into the waiting arms of the world, so keep singing your song of love in the emotional desert.

 

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